[CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

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[CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby CreeperHunter55 » 1 August 2020, 16:03

New character I suggest for PB2 community! I hope you'll like him :)

ENCELAD


The characteristics:
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1. Human
2. Blood is red
3. Armor standard
4. Swords turquoise
5. Mobility standard
6. Voice is emotionless, clear, medium timbre
7. Melancholy, detachment, coldness, persistence
8. Physically healthy, the body is modified for extreme conditions, mental processes are suppressed

His Spacesuit is made in the colors of one of the moons of Saturn. On his shoulder is a hexagon, one of the symbols of this planet.

Voice lines:
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Colonizer_Enemy_Spotted
1. Tracking target!
2. Unknown object.
3. Permission to engage.
4. Activity Spotted.

Colonizer_Enemy_Down
1. Threat neutralized!
2. Enemy out!

Colonizer_Dying
1. Support required.
2. Decompression.

Colonizer_Hurt (2 lines)
Colonizer_Hard_Hurt (1 line)

Colonizer_Death (2 lines)

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1chYN7yy6a1ZXEUerIki9iEv7zV6LdWEH

|| FROM PERSONAL DIARY
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Who would have thought it?.. You're already all alone on a half-burned space Shuttle hovering near the event horizon of a black hole... All around is the bottomless blackness of Space... You've flown too far... You've had that feeling again where you can't believe what happened... no rage, no fear... At first there was nothing. Only a terrible apathy... which gradually killed all your emotions and feelings. Only a state of depression and hopelessness remained...

But then the rage came. You broke all the instruments, but nothing was working properly... in addition, half the ship was slowly smouldering inside. All the remaining power only slightly supported the life-support systems in the surviving control cabin...
Then came the fear. Fear of the unknown. You don't know exactly what happened to your companions in the main compartments... But based on their last screams, which you listened to on the radio in your helmet for about thirty seconds, you can assume that it was a predatory alien life form or an unknown virus... you begged me to tell you what was going on... but they were consumed by the animal instinct of survival... My brain seemed to shut down.

You have never felt such fear... No one is getting in touch. The entire team seems to be dead... The control cabin gradually begins to smoke from the non-functioning ventilation system. Hugging your knees, you sit on the uncomfortable metal floor and wait for your turn... Apathy has taken hold of you again... You're resigned... but nothing is happening anymore. The silence is oppressive. Too quiet. Even the sound of your heartbeat and breathing didn't break the silence that engulfed both the ship and your suit... I have no idea what I can do... Just look out the window at the beautiful light refracted by the black hole... It's so dark... It's like looking into your soul, seeing through you...
There's nowhere to go... and there's no point. Your return to Enceladus, much less to Earth, was never planned. Space has become the last frontier of humanity, it is necessary to explore new horizons. The entire ship was designed to fly to an exoplanet, one way. There's just not enough for more. You and your companions Believed in your mission, but no one expected it to turn out so monstrously. Now there's nothing to lose...

You go to the main compartment along the corridor... Pools and spots of blood everywhere ... its drops float in weightless space... They reflect the flickering of dim, cold lamps that waste their last energy... You can feel it getting darker with each step... It was as if not only silence but also darkness were taking over your last stronghold... The life-support systems failed as soon as it happened. But the crew had enough time to equip themselves... It is a pity that this did not help them...
Hanging wiring sparks... Someone was trying to protect by it. Or maybe your team got so scared that they literally climbed the walls, scratched them, broke them... Anyway, already all the same... Coming closer to the scene of the incident, the eyes caught on a frozen severed hand stuck in underground communications... you Go into the compartment... There are only the corpses of their comrades... and, as you assumed, the alien trash that devours them... You don't even want to consider it... And the creature doesn't give a damn about you, either, having got carried away with what it's doing...

Nowhere to run... Between the two unavoidables, to be eventually devoured alive or to face death in interstellar space, you have chosen... One step... one step, through the gaping, huge hole from the meteorite, into the mists of such a great and unknown Universe, to count the stars for the last time... You open the visor of your helmet... Decompression. The world is not so Sunny and friendly, the ruthless Cosmos has won. ||

|| GALLERY OF HOME
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby Nyove » 1 August 2020, 16:08

Woah!

I must say, when I first this the first time, I'm impressed!
It even comes with his own voice lines and lore!

I can see this character being implemented into the PB2 game.
Good job :)
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby RAYANE THE PRO GMAER » 1 August 2020, 16:37

wow



I have to say it's very good I didn't expect it to be like this, keep it up bro

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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby yizhe » 1 August 2020, 16:43

dang amazing!!!!
Meep!
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby Silk1 » 1 August 2020, 16:54

This is a really cool design plus the voicelines are good stuff.
I noticed some of the line edges are pretty sharp. Is that part of the design?
woo wee wee woo
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby CreeperHunter55 » 1 August 2020, 17:16

Silk1 wrote:This is a really cool design plus the voicelines are good stuff.
I noticed some of the line edges are pretty sharp. Is that part of the design?

Yeah, because Enceladus is an icy moon, you need some sharp parts on suit to survive better :P
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby mingo1 » 1 August 2020, 19:15

I like the helmet design a lot!! Love this CH

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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby daft punk 777 » 2 August 2020, 08:47

Nice! But why all his outlines is black??
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby CreeperHunter55 » 2 August 2020, 12:55

daft punk 777 wrote:Nice! But why all his outlines is black??

This is a good question, I'll try to fix it soon
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby CreeperHunter55 » 2 August 2020, 16:59

Updated, thanks!
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby daft punk 777 » 3 August 2020, 07:01

WOW, thats better!!!!!
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby Knight Athoriiz » 3 August 2020, 19:44

The feet are a bit strangely designed with all the jaggy parts but that's probably just me being picky.
The bend between the leg and thigh seems a bit too sudden, maybe it's the geometrical armor towards the calf?
There's tons, and I mean tons, of lines. That might make things a bit unreadable in the future, but it's PB2 style so I guess there's not really much you can do except remove details you find unnecessary :c
The red lines on the thigh and inside the calf armor don't appear anywhere else on the skin, making it look a bit out of place.

Overall though the skin looks awesome, and would fit even better in arctic environments. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you!

edit: hooooly higby that story is dreadfully epic


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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby CreeperHunter55 » 4 August 2020, 15:04

> The red lines on the thigh and inside the calf armor don't appear anywhere else on the skin, making it look a bit out of place

Fixed, thanks! :D
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby nightmar » 6 August 2020, 00:01

Well, hello there handsome!
How many bugs does this game have anyway? jeez
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby nastypop » 6 August 2020, 19:33

Very in-depth character lore, and the design is top-notched as well (maybe even a bit too much for PB2 Standards);
A bit of a Raze-3 feel to it, would certainly fit nicely as the stronger version of both Hermes & Hexagon.


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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby Rajhit » 10 August 2020, 15:44

Good one!, is the best character i have seen in the day 8)
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby Mega Triangle » 29 September 2020, 12:24

Skin is very cool

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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby Jerry- » 11 October 2020, 13:00

This character will be used by everyone in pb2 it's just amazing nothing else
ye it needs some fixes and updates but still good so far
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Re: [CHARACTER] Colonizer of Enceladus *

Postby Mr jaks nes » 15 October 2020, 23:27

Very interesting character, creeper.
I love the fact that you made it own lore and everything about your it, it needs some little improvement but hey it's okay.

Anyways i would recommend you to use this image if you would like to improve your character creation a little bit.

https://prnt.sc/v06gkr
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