Shredding Viper Vk1.4

[Thundrex]

http://i.imgur.com/Krc5wii.png

Here's the process I did to make it: http://prntscr.com/ambtvs

It's an auto-shotgun I made for PB2.5. It basically shreds foes to death with lots of low damage pellets at a high rate of fire.

What do you all think of it? What could I have improved on? Please don't be like "tht sht sucks 1/10" or "very nice good job dear 10/10" or just "nice" or anything. I'd rather have actual critique. Please tell me directly what you find wrong with it, or what you find nice about it.

[stfu]

the whole thing looks too busy especially the stock, considering most if not all people put their cheek on the stock to aim that doesn't look very comfortable and actually looks like it's about to take your eye out
the grip looks uncomfortable as all hell
4/10
i'm not saying i could do better because i can't do shit properly in this world, but you wanted critique so there you go

[Green eyed Demon]

Looks way too fat and uncomfortable, must be a pain in the arse to hold the grip and it definitely requires improvement

I'd give it a 3,5/10 as it is now

[Incompetence]

the colors are neat but my only concern is the bulkiness and the grip - bulkiness being a prob since it makes the shotgun look heavier than normal and the grip not providing much room

Other than that, no other complaints but still open for improvement 6/10

[Thundrex]

@stfu
There is no real stock. Grip is meant to be PB2-styled. Take a look at the CS-Bloom and other various weapons in-game.

@GED
I feel as though the height-to-length ratio is just right, and making it thinner/longer would make it look awkward.

@MoonHawk
I agree that it is overall rather bare, but I'm not entirely sure where to add detail. I may change the smaller line size on the barrel to be overall more fitting.

@Incompetence
Refer to other responses.

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Thank you for all of the feedback.

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PS: On other in-game weapons, I notice that some triggers seem to be missing. Should I change or just remove the trigger?