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Re: Epic Fail

Postby protagonist » 29 October 2015, 23:43

Looks good IMO. The lighting on the suppressor/muzzle break is a bit too intense though.
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Re: Epic Fail

Postby Hikarikaze » 30 October 2015, 01:06

I remember this gun. The drawing looks great, but I have to agree with the intense lighting as well, though the effect looks cool as is.
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Re: Epic Fail

Postby Thundrex » 31 October 2015, 00:59

There are a few things you need to work on. To me, it appears as though you make things quickly, like you aren't patient about it. I notice you forgot to fill some stuff in in a lot of your creations, or you don't notice it. You also did some weird stuff with smooth lines in this one. If fixed up, I'd give it a 10/10.
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Re: Epic Fail

Postby Andropov » 31 October 2015, 12:50

KLMJETWORK wrote:Quickly, yes. Maybe forty minutes. Doom was there to witness that as I sent him updates in PM.

Fill in? Example. If what you mean is on the grip, then oh no, that is supposed to be like that.

Smooth lines? Line size 5 on normal mode.

I meant the rigid lines. And you see how inside of the lines there is some stuff that isn't fully filled in?

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Re: Epic Fail

Postby Sniper J » 31 October 2015, 16:03

Looks really nice, the colors and the detail are great.

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